Edits for Nicholi's Vengeance

I received the file for Nicholi's Vengeance back from my editor today. Hooray! I really have to admire a guy who can make me feel like I've written the most amazing piece of fiction the world has ever seen even as he's pointing out the flaws in it. ^_^ There aren't near as many scratches with the metaphorical red pen as I was expecting, but there's still a lot of work to be done on the later chapters.

*cracks knuckles* I'm actually looking forward to diving into the rewrites on this one, especially since I knew there were problems with those later chapters when I submitted the story initially. So at least we're on the same page going into this. And it's really nice to have some specific parts where I can strengthen the story pointed out to me, when before I had just a vague sense of "something here isn't quite right" to go on.

I see lots of writing in my very near future....